Comments for SSC Gifted & Talented

Comment on Determination by Olivia by Alice Coulson

Alice Coulson — Wed, 06 May 2009 17:14:01 +0000

Really cool.

Bryonie — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:50:17 +0000

Very cool and serious, they look like they are in business!!

olivia Powell — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:36:04 +0000

I used short and snappy sentences to make this effective!

olivia Powell — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:35:02 +0000

I used short and snappy sentences to make it effective!!!

olivia powell

alice — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:15:02 +0000

Very cool picture. Very unique,

Xanthe — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:14:21 +0000

hey olivia .Really good piece of writing.My fav part is My heart beating like never before.
xanthe

Charlotte — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 12:13:53 +0000

I think that Olivia has put alot of thought into this and I think it sounds like a pro writer wrote it

ANNABEL — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 11:58:47 +0000

Olivia your writing is great you have really cool writing skills! You know so much about him and how he feels!

morgan — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 11:57:44 +0000

a real help for those victims of bullying. i know how it feels o well done to all you kids who helped to make this possible.

alice — Wed, 11 Mar 2009 11:56:50 +0000

It would make a good start to a Lewis Hamilton’s
auto biography.